Basically dead

Posted: August 29, 2013 in Uncategorized
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Never had a chance 

His facial expressions show 

Give him his moment

  1. Himani B says:

    aha! very nice 🙂

  2. I love the beautiful simplicity in this…wonderfully done. Thanks, as well, for giving me the follow on my blog. I’m more than happy to return the favor, and look forward to rummaging more thoroughly through your writing 🙂

  3. ideflex says:

    Love the way this works on so many different levels – thanks for following!

  4. amwthl says:

    Reading through these poems are helping me understand why people like poems like haikus and the like. After years of banal school poetry, these were a good find 😀

  5. Micah says:

    This one is incredible. The last line “Give him his moment” is perfectly chilling–in a good way, of course. Cheers!

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