I have many dreams
They all scream
Screams of joy
But I’m just a small boy
This world is big
On a tree I’m just a twig
One of my dreams I’ve done
Going to the USA has begun
I have more dreams
They are all in a frigid stream
Running away from me
All I can do is just see
See my dreams going into that empty space
They disappear without a trace
I just keep dreaming
And keep re-dreaming
And hope one won’t slip away
And that a dream will stay
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Here’s to more rhyming schemes and endless dreams – keep writing, and read Rainer Maria Rilke’s Letters to a Young Poet for both inspiration and validation. Below are links where you can read them for free.
http://www.scriptorpress.com/burningmanbooks/14_2001_rilkeletters.pdf
http://www.carrothers.com/rilke_main.htm
This is very good. Keep at it!
Thanks
Nice! I really liked this post. Especially “This world is big. On a tree I’m just a twig.” Great poem. 🙂
Thanks means a lot 🙂
You’re welcome. Keep on writing. I noticed in the title of your poem it said “I’m rhyming… what?” Did you just start using rhymes in your writings? Again, great job. 🙂
I never rhyme so when I did it was a big deal lol
Cool. 🙂 You rhyme very well, so keep up the good work buddy. I’m looking forward to reading more of your posts.
I try to post two a day 🙂
Awesome I didn’t know that. I really need to read more of other peoples post. I’m pretty new to wordpress and i usually post older stuff, answer comments, or do trifecta. My fiance seablackwithink, and I both love your work.And we appreciate your comradery. I promise I’ll start reading more of your post. 🙂
I have only been on here for six weeks. two days it will be 7 weeks. So I guess that is new too?
Yeah that’s pretty new too. I’ve only been on for a month and 8 days. lol. My fiance seablackwithink has only been on since the end of april and she has 162 post. So I guess it’s what you do not how long we’ve been on 🙂 ttyl
lol. i got 528 posts. I need a life.
This is seablackwithink….keep writing never stop…are you interested in being published? if so let Liquid Poet know…I have a publisher.. She does know a publisher. That’s a lo of post. I have like 10, lol. but there will be more.
And Dude, never stop dreaming.
I like the creativity of this one! Dreams are important and go hand in hand with Hope, so never give up on either. It’s good that you have time to write! I would love to have more time myself, but I con’t right now. You will only get better and better with each write.! 😀 I am bad about going back over an older poem and re-doing it to…LOL
Keep writing!
Thanks. I never redo poems 🙂
Probably the best way to be, but I use to do the same thing with paintings or sketches I’d done. When I’d walk by, I’d want to change something…haha 😀
Just get someone else to say something positive and move on from it 🙂